Redwall: Warlords

 Prolouge:

(Black screen once last trailer fades. All is silent until the voice of Cate Blanchett begins her monolouge)

Cate: Over three years ago, many magic blades were created for the purpose of uniting the RWL World...

(Black fades to scene of Retto and Boze all holding blades with looks of, "Ooooh, shiny!" on their faces)

Cate: 2 were given to the Admins whose wisdom surpasses all...

(Fade to black. Wait a couple seconds then fade to shot of Warhammer, Crimson Guard, Knights of the Dark Lord, Daemons, and The Blue Hordes of Ungatt Trunn, each holding a blade. All raise their  in a toast-like fashion before going back to work.)

Cate: 5 were given to the Red Ravens, each of whom worked hard to keep their high ranks...

(Fade to black once more. Wait a couple more seconds before fading to shot of 9 random Members AND l33ts. Each holds their blades close to their chests greedily--as if they are afraid to let them go.)

Cate: 9 were given to the influencial board members, each hungry for power...

(fade to black again. We see Stormclaws back as he's watching another Magic blade get created)

Cate: But they were all decieved. For you see, the dark lord Stormclaw created another Blade...
(whispers) One with the power to rule them all...

(Fade to black again. Pause for effect. Whispy, spidery letters appear as the title RWL: The Battle for Emperor appears. Hold title for a couple seconds before fading to black. Pause for effect, then we see armies marching over barren wastelands with Stormclaw at the head of the command)

Cate: One by one the nations fell to the Magic blade, each powerless to stop it. Until...

(We see Kalamath, Shael, and The Beatles all at the head of their side of the battle. Kalamath throws down her arm and a batch of Mouse archers shoot up the Rats)

Cate: A last alliance between the race of Mice and Squirrels went against the power of the Blade to save RWL.

(We see Stormclaw with the great blade in hand as he flings mice aside. The Bubble Gum Squad rushes at Stormy to try to stop him but Stormy flings him against a rock. He dies ((sorry!!)) The Beatles rushes over to Bubble Gum Squad and holds his head for a moment. He then sees his sword on the ground.)

Cate: Enraged at his friend's death, The Beatles, heir to Gondor, took up The Bubble Gum Squads sword

(We see The Beatles swipe at Stormy. Stormy breaks the sword nearly in half. The Beatles eyes widen but he slashes again at his hand. His strike is true, Stormy drops the Blade, turning to dust. His army then evaporates as the Mice/Squirrals let out a cry of victory. The Beatles stares at the Blade for a long time)

Cate: It could have ended there. For you see, the Blade cannot be destroyed by conventional means...No, only at the place where it was created, Salamandastron...

(fade to black. Pause for effect then we see The Beatles riding on a horse w/ the blade around his neck)

Cate: The Beatles did not destroy the blade. He was enticed by its promises of power...

(We see The Beatles let out a battle cry as his little group is attacked. Fade to black. Fade back to scene of The Beatles floating dead((sorry!!)) in river.)

Cate: But the Blade betrayed him.

(Zoom to river bottom. Blade is scene in the river bed.)

Cate: So there it remained. And what once was, was forgotten. Fact became legend...Legend, myth. And what should not have been forgotten, was. And so the Blade lay dorment, the world in ignorance of its power, until...

(A hand reaches down into the river bed. Zoom in on the back of Wolfbites head as he looks at the Maple Bar)

Cate: The creature Wolfbite ((no offense, dude)) found it. He fled to the mountains, away from the light.

(We see Wolfbite crouched in a dark cave. Only the outline of his body is visible. It seems like the only light is coming from the Blade.)

Wolfbite: (hissing) Ahhhh......You are miiiiiiiiiiiiine....My ownnnnnnnnn...My preciousssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss...

Cate: And so he remained, the blade giving Wolfbite unusually long life for a good 2 years... Yet the blade abandoned him as well, in time...

(fade to black, viewer may assume we are still in the cave. All we hear is a distant howling from Wolfbite...)

Wolfbite: Nooooooooooooo...They tooksss it! They tookss my precioussssssssssssssss...

(Fade to scene of blade on cave floor)

Cate: But then, something happened. Something the blade did not intend.

(We see Ad the Rat fumbling around in the sand. His hand pauses on the blade. Slowly he lifts it up, examining it's shiny-ness  . He then puts it away in his coat pocket.)

Cate: Ad The Rat, a mouse from the Shire came upon the ring. And so it has remained in his posession...

(Fade to black)

Cate: But dark winds are stirring...Stormclaw's forces are gathering once again...A new battle shall be waged over the future of RWL. The Blade, you see, is yearning for it's master once again....

(Fade to black, end prolouge)

Note: I ment this to be funny.  It was NOT ment to be offensive to anyone.  Please have fun with it, and I'll post scean one later today or tomorrow ^_~.

 I liked it, that was great! But come on, you made me Gollum?!  I think of my self more like Gandalf or at least Arragon. In the hobbit there was an army of wolfs, I would even take that over Gollum. (not offended)

How about this?

As the light from the rising moon shines unusually bright, the shadow of a figure appears on the top of a rock laden cliff. Then comes the sound of a howl that brakes the nights silence. Wolf Bite picks up his word in his fanged jaws and leaps from the cliff. Barely can be seen flickering of the moon light on the blade as he charges relentlessly into the mist to met his overwhelming enemies.


Wolf Bite

 Aww, c'mon, a majority of the peeps on here aren't in it at all.  I plan on including as many peeps as possible later, though :rolleyes: .  Wolfbite, I have nothing against you at all.

 Ooh... Cool... I hope there will be more... What about me?  

 I said I find no offence at all.  I think it was funny.  You did so much work on it too.  Maybe I should be happy to have such a large role in the movie.  And at least I did not die.  I look foreword to act II.

Wolf Bite

 Yey, I'm the bearer of the Blade, a little mouse from the shire. (Biblo)

Maybe you could be Frodo

It the birthday party of Biblo next post (Smiles)

 That was great, TR Shadow! I loved it! You had me busting up laughing. (On a side note: You're a good writer. You really know how to set a mood when you're writing.)

 *sniff*  Wolf Bite's in it, but I'm not? :'(

 Act 1: Scene 1

(Sweep camera over foresty area where our scene opens. The sun is shining, the birds are singing, it seems like paradise. Menatuses back is seen sitting against a tree. Camera peers over her shoulder and we see her working on her website. Rotate camera slowly so we see her expression as shes working(should be puzzeled). Hold this shot as the words The Shire...6 monthes later appear at the bottom left of the screen. We hear a faint singing over the wind. Menatus looks up, startled. Zoom in slightly to frame Menatus's face as she grins once she recognizes the voice. Flash to the road where we see Bloodrath in gray and driving a wagon. Flash back to Menatus running down the forest path. We see Bloodrath moving further down the road when Menatus appears above him on the bank)

Menatus: (arms crossed, slighty annoyed but amused) You're late.

(Bloodrath stops the cart)

Blood: I am never late. Nor am I early. I have come exactly when I wanted to.

(Both try to maintain a straight face but fail, cracking up. Menatus jumps into the cart and hugs blood)

Menatus: It's great to see you again!

Blood: You didn't think I'd miss Ad's birthday, did you?

(Flash to scene slightly later in the day. The cart has moved farther down the road, it's more open country than forest now)

Menatus: Tell me what's been going on the boards! I want to know everything!

Blood: Wow, you're curious. Kind of strange for a Vole... (pause) (musing) News of the outside...Well, many things are happening, and as long as the world continues to turn, they will continue (slowly pan away from the cart so we see them continueing down the road) The world seems to have forgotten the existance of voles, however, and for that I am very thankful...

(Flash to further down the road where we see voles in a marketplace all doing various things. Frame Blood's face as he raises his eyebrows before moving to scene of voles trying to get a banner up. The banner says in big letters Happy Birthday Ad!)

Blood: So, the long awaited party...

Menatus: Yes, he's got the whole Shire in an uproar.

Blood: Eh, that should please him I should think...

Menatus: Half the Shire's been invited... (pause as Menatus looks down and thinks for a moment) He's up to something...

Blood: (looking indifferent) Meh...

Menatus: (Smugly) Fine, keep your secrets. But you know, you really should stop posting insightful things--you've officially been labeled as a "disturber of the peace".

Blood: Oh is that so? (looks to side of road where 2 voles are beating rugs. The wife scowls at him and the husband frowns. Sky looks slightly hurt, but shrugs it off.)

(Slightly later in the day. Menatus has already left the cart. Blood stops it in front of Ad's house. Camera follows Blood as he approaches the door, tapping on it a bit with his staff.)

Ad: (Shouting from within) Go away! No more spots open for the Clan of Winter! No visitors, well wishers, or complaners!

Blood: (smiles) And what of old friends?

(pause as suddenly the front door is flung open. Ad stands there for a moment, surprized)

Ad: (in awe) Bloodrath?

(hugs him. Switch to camera inside Ad's house. Ad is ecstatic, trying to remain polite but excited just the same. He takes Blood's staff and hat, groaning as he puts them on the mantle. Blood has to crouch in the tiny house.)

Ad: Tea? Wine? (runs off muttering about various things to serve Sky)

(Blood hits head on a support beam and groans. He looks around the new room when something catches his eye. Camera looks over his shoulder as he picks up an ancient looking map. Zoom in to the name of the Lonely Mountain. Shift to camera focusing on Ad)

Ad: I could make you some eggs if you like... (looks down hallway) Bloodrath?

Blood: (appearing from behind) Just tea, thank you.

(There is a sudden knock on the door. Ad jumps and looks angrily to Bloodrath)

Ad: (in agitated whisper) I'm not here!(knocks cease.  Ad'stone returns to normal) I'm sick of Voles bothering me! I want to leave the Shire and find adventures again! Someplace where my talents can be put to good use! (sighs, then looks up hopefully) I think I'm going to visit Shale in Rivendell...(poors Sky tea)

Blood: (Blowing on his tea to cool it) So you are leaving then?

Ad: Indeed

Blood: (Raises eyebrows and sips tea) Menatus suspects something...

Ad: (annoyed that Blood would even say such a thing aloud) Of course she does! She's in the top 10!

Blood: She really admires you, you know...

Ad: (sadly) She'd come with me too, probably...but I know she'd rather stay here... (pause) I'm old, Bloodrath, I feel it in my bones. I may not look it, but I feel...thin. Sort of stretched like butter on to much toast... (pause.) I need a holiday, and I don't think I'll return. I mean not to...

(end scene)

 Btw, if anyone has requests for parts, then PM me and I'll conciter it, ok?

 I absolutely love this! ROFL it's made my day! can't wait for the next bit.

 It is AWESOME! Pity Beatles had to die. Who's bubble gum squad?

 I will give it to you TR, you are a dang good writer. You have to keep writing, I am getting interested.

 Heehee, I love it! It's a great idea...I'm supposing that was supposed to be me in Rivendell? I don't mind....I'm the kind of person who would ask to be Eowyn or Arwen (or any Elf) anyways... <_<  :P  Looking out for more!

 Heh, me playing the part that Gandalf played. heh, pretty nice. Thanks btw. Also, I love the way how you wrote this all out and everything. Very well done.! :)  B)  

 You made ME Frodo? Cool! I feel so honored ^_^ This is the second LOTR-like story I've been in. =D I'm a vole? Vixen would have been cool...anyway, that is SO COOL! Hehee...I'm fun now! Yes, it's very well done! I'm so honored! Thanks, TR =D

Funny how I don't think I've ever talked to Bloodrath before XD. Strange mix.

~Me

 hehe...kewl. i could be an ent, if you get that far.....an ent, btw, is the big walking trees in the two towers. funfunfun...i am at skool, a kid named niel is next to me and he's a nerd.. :D he could be....um...i dunno. i'm bored. boredboredbored.  <_< so bored.  :blink: so veryvery bored. :unsure: o well......good job on the lotr thingy...bye...bored...

 Wow, so I guess no one noticed that in the first scene Ad is a mouse but that he magicly changes into a vole in the second scene...LOL!

This is what I have so far with casting:
Frodo: Menatus
Gandalf: Bloodrath
Bilbo: Ad
Merry: Calria
Pippen: Bluemoon_the_wolf
Sam: General Austen
Gollum: Wolfbite
Legolas: Shael
Gimli: Wickedclaw
Aragorn: Bloodwake
Borameir: Kilkenne
Sauromon: ******
Sauron: Stormclaw

Those are just the main parts, though.  The *s mean I have someone for that part, but I won't reviel it untill later.  If you've PMed me, BTW, you have one of the * parts, ok?

If you don't have a part, it prolly means:

A) I just haven't included you yet
B) You have one of the * parts
C) I hate you

~TR Shadow~

 No, I was the vole...I think.

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Menatus: Tell me what's been going on the boards! I want to know everything!

Blood: Wow, you're curious. Kind of strange for a Vole...

 Well, I kinda went with the fact that hobbits were voles, so Ad was too  :P .

 i love it you should make the whole series and make it all in one then make a new topic with just lord of the rings

oops... i meant blades

 Well,done TR!Can i come back to life?Like,get reborned?I want to play.why did you kill me?i dont hate you......... :(  

 Yippee! I'm Legolas! *dances* BTW, my name's spelled Shael, not Shale, although it is a pretty interesting name...

 Act 1: Scene 2

(Scene opens at twilight.  Blood and Ad are sitting on a hill overlooking the preparations for Ad's party, smoking pipes. Ad smiles and looks at Blood for a moment before blowing a big smoke ring. Ad laughs before blowing a 15th century Spanish-Looking ship. Focus on the ship as it sails through the smoke ring before returning to Blood and Ad.)

Ad: Blood my old friend, this'll be a night to remember...

(Scene shifts abruptly as a HUGE firecracker explodes, showering the party w/ sparks. We hear the sound of Vole dancing music as the camera pans over the party. Voles are dancing, drinking, chatting, cheering and generally being merry. Focus in for a moment on Menatus doing some funny Vole jig ((Wow, Menatus, you can dance!)) before pulling back to get a shot of the huuuuuuuuge cake  2 RWL players are hauling towards a stage. Pull away from them to get a brief shot of Mark laughing with a mug of Ale and leaning against the barrel. Next shot is of Austen staring bashfully at a dancing Kalamath before looking glumly back at his mug. Turn then to Ad who is seen shaking hands with Kyle. Camera returns back to Aus as Menatus jumps up behind him, startling him slightly.)

Menatus:(laughing) Go on , make a move! (We see shot of Kalamath laughing while dancing along)

Aus: Er, I think I'll get another ale...(starts to get up before Menatus grabs him by the shoulders)

Menatus: Oh no you don't! (turns a reluctant Aus to face the area where Kalamath is dancing) Go on! (shoves Aus in her direction. Aus stumbles but is immediately swept into the jig by a grinning Kalamath. Menatus laughs)

(Leave them and turn to Blood who heaves his staff into the ground to launch another firecracker. Shift to Ad who is regaling an audience of random vole Dibbuns w/ his past adventures. The Dibbuns are hanging on his everyword and Ad is totally setting the mood)

(Shift to where Blood is seen laughing as he selects some more firecrackers from his cart. Once Blood walks away, we see Calria come out from where she was hiding behind Blood's cart. She stands there innocently for a moment until she's sure Blood's gone. She then kicks the tent.  Bluemoon_the_Wolf scrambles under the tentflap and jumps up beside Calria.)

Cal:(terse whisper) Quickly, hun! (Hoists Blue up onto the cart  so that blue ends up falling face first into the fireworks. Switch to scene of Blood laughing as he launches off a firework which turns to pretty butterfree before dissapating. Turn back to Cal and Blue.  Blue grabs a firework and holds it up so Cal can see)

Cal: No, the big 'un! (Blue grabs a big red firework before jumping off the cart. Cal's eyes light up as they innocently stroll off to a tent. We see them on the inside of a tent with the firecracter between them. Blue is seen crouching as he lights the fuse.)

Blue: (once fuse is lit) Done!

Cal: Hun, it's supposed to be in the ground! (shoves the firecracker at Blue)

Blue: It IS in the ground! (shoves it back at Cal)

Cal: We're 'uposed to be outside, dear! (shoves it back at Blue)

Blue: It was your idea!

(The firecracker launches itself off, taking the tent with it. Cal and Blue are covered in soot from the thing blasting off and fly backwards. The firecracker spirals into the heavens before exploding into a dragon shape. Voles see it and run, panicking at the sight).

Menatus: (shoving Ad away from the dragon) Watch out, ther's a dragon!

Ad: (aggrivated) Dragon? Hasn't been one in years... (Mena suddenly throws Ad onto the ground as the dragon's belly nearly touches them. The dragon continues over the party before exploding into a HUGE shower of light some ways off. All voles remain motionless for a moment before applauding. Music returns. Camera focuses on the charred faces of Cal and Blue frozen in a look of "Whoa".)
Cal: That was good...

Blue: Dude, let's get another!

(Blood suddenly appears behind the pair)

Blood: Bluemoon_The_Wolf and Calria...I should have known! (hoists the two of them to their feet by their ears. Both wince. Shift to where they are washing dishes while Blood relaxes on a chair smoking his pipe. We hear Blue mutter "God, what's your PROBLEM?" under his breath. Change camera to the one focussed on the party as Ad approaches the stage area. Music quiets a bit.)

All: Speech! Speech! Speech! (Ad stands on stool.)

Ad: My dear people! (cheers. Ad motions for quiet) My dear KMs!  Pojo Peeps!  Cafi members! (We see Beatles standup and cheer loudly)  And the Blade clan thingy! Today is my 111th birthday, I am eleventy-one! (more cheers) I hope you're all enjoying yourselves! It has been to short a time to live amoung such admirable voles(more cheers) I don't know half of you as well as I'd like and like less than half of you as well as you deserve (silence amoung the voles as each frowns, puzzeled. Quiet murmurs begin.) I uh, (He fingers his pocket where the blade is stashed. We see the smile on Ad's face begin to fade) I have things to do (grabs the Blade from his pocket, hiding it behind his back. Whispering) I have put this off for far to long. (Menatus's face falls to a puzzeled frown, her eyes look concerned.) I regret to announce that this is the end. I bid you all a very fond farewell (lowers voice) Goodbye. (squeezes the blade. He suddenly disappears. The crowd erupts in a huge gasp of surprise. Menatus jumps, wondering what happened. Close scene with Blood's look of disapproval before moving to the next scene.)

End Scene

~TR Shadow~

 Beatles:

Coool, I'm I... Is... Isildur, yes! By Jove! That reminds me of Iskagil, who remembers him? The Happy Pony Raiser? Hehe. Kudos, TR, thanks for the role!
(Though I don't know buble gum squad...he's my friend, haha.)


~Beatles (Mysty is very nice to let me post this message!)

 Beatles, I HAD to put you in that role after Stormy banned you ^_~.  Just a side note: I updated the post with the castings, and, if anyone sees a big part that I missed PM me.  And on another note, if anyone PMs me asking for a part, I will be sure to include you somewhere.

 i didn't get a part. you hate me? *sniff* i feel so unloved......

 Yeh, I appreciate it. I luv the story. Like cal says, made my day!

~Beatles (will not abuse Mysty more)

 Heh, I'll try to include you somewhere.  Please keep these In Pms though.  I would like to keep this topic filled with the story and comments, ok?

 Just thinking...
What's the shortened version of "Holby?"
I want a shortened version of my name, too :( , just like Calria. :)

 Err... I did, but I could tell you about, had to go to bed... Yey, I'm a magical mouse/vole  :D

That be Hol or Hob or something? ~Shrugs~

 Holb, Holbs, Goose, Hol...
I suppose they'd all do :rolleyes:  

 Goose, yes that perfect for you.  :P nah

It be Hol, really

 Look like, I have to get to work the hobbits, which of course be starting me as Bilbo, Bloodrath as Gandalf, just so it works with the RWL, battle for emperor.

 Three rings for the Admin kings under the sky,
Seven for Emperors in their halls of stone,
Nine for multis, doomed to die,
And one for the dark lord on his dark throne,
In the lands of Redwall where the shadows lie.

Okay, so technically there should either be eight Emperors- if you count Retto and I- or six, if you don't. Call it poetic license.

I'm Sauron? :o

Oh well. I think I should be okay. :ph34r:


...I'm not evil by choice. I just disable people because that's my job.

 Me hatesss  Stormclaw's signature.....


:P I'll be the longest soon enough! :D:D

 Act 1: Scene 3

(Scene opens with the camera facing down a darkened path to Ad's house. We hear footsteps come down the path and soft giggles. An invisible force opens Ad's gate and shuts it behind it as the camera continues to follow this unseen prescence down the path. Switch to camera inside Ad's house as the same invisible prescence opens and shuts his door mysteriously. Ad suddenly appears before us, laughing as he tosses the blade in the air. He catches it in midair and grins as he pockets the thing, tapping it affectionately. He then grabs a walking stick and moves into another room. Blood is sitting their calmly smoking his pipe. Ad jumps at the sight of the fox but goes about his business anyway)

Blood: (annoyed) I suppose you think that was terribly clever, eh?

Ad: (grins) C'mon, Bloodrath, it was just a bit of fun... (laughs) Did you see their faces?

Blood: There are many magic blades in this world, Ad, and NONE should be used lightly!

Ad: Awwww...it was just a joke... (pauses. Sighs) You're probably right... (sighs again) You're always right...(places other wepons into the backpack) You will keep an eye on Menatus, won't you?

Blood: (smiles) Two eyes, and whenever I can spare them.

Ad: (distantly, somewhat sad) I'm leaving everything to him...

Blood:(raises eyebrows) And the blade?

Ad: (waves hand dismissively) Yes, it's in an envelope on the mantlepiece. (frowns, paw hovering over his pocket) No, it's in my pocket... (laughs nervously as he takes it out) Isn't that odd? (Lowers voice) Yet...why not? I should keep it.

Blood: (concerned) I think you should leave it behind... Is that so hard?

Ad: (looks up, surprized) Well, no... (looks back at the blade) and yes... I can't give it up... (tone begins to rise with each word) I don't feel like parting with it. I found it after all, it's MINE!

Blood: Now, now, no need for anger...

Ad: (sharply) So what if I'm angry?! (lowers voice to a creepy whisper) It's mine...my own...my prescioussssssssssssssssssss...

Blood: (taken aback) Prescious? It has been called that before, but not by you.

Ad: (irratated again) What business is it of yours?! What should you care what I do with my posessions?!!

Blood: (calmly) I think you've had that thing long enough...

Ad: (accusingly) You want to take it from me!

(room darkens drastically as Blood begins to grow larger, more menacing. His voice is now deeper and more threatening)

Blood: Ad the Rat!(Ad backs up against a wall, trembling and obviously terified) Do not think of me as some conjourer of cheap tricks! I am not trying to hurt you! (effect fades as Blood returns to normal, looking really concerned. Softly.) I'm trying to help you.

Ad: Blood... (runs and hugs Bloodrath)

Bloodrath: (after they part) All these long years we've been friends, Ad, trust me. Let it go...

Ad: (determined) You're right. The ring must go to Menatus. (gathers things) Well, it is late and the road is long...(opens door to leave)

Blood: Ad...the Blade is still in your pocket.

Ad: (face falls) Oh yeah...(takes it out of his pocket and holds his hand steady for a long time. His hand begins to tremble as slowly it turns. The Blade falls to the floor. Ad walks briskly out the door, obviously an effort to move from the Blade. Bloodrath follows) (Smiles shakily) You know, I've thought up an ending for my book. "And he lived happily ever after, to the end of his days."

Blood: (smiles) And I'm sure you will.

Ad: Goodbye Bloodrath... May Winter Protect you always

Blood: Goodbye, dear Ad The Rat

(Ad smiles and turns towards the path.)

Blood: (mysteriously) Until our next meeting....

(end scene)

Enjoy!

 I'm SAM!?!?!?!?? YAY!!!!!!!!! *runs off to find some taters*

P.S. I'm lucky, I have Aus for short!!!! *runs off*

 I got...uhh...Me! Heh...Holby, you got Holbs. That's what I call you anyway. There's no shortness of Menatus...

Me. Mennie...meh.

 Can i  be Cate Blancett?

 Great poem, Stormclaw!

"Nine for multis, doomed to die." ----- That cracked me up, heeheehee!

Is that the only reason you're Sauron?

 Somewhere in there there was the kingdom of Dol-A... Wait I mean TBV who had no powerful blades, all they had was the power of regeneration so they were struck down time apon time by treachery and deceit. They arose from the dead 4 times before, and shall again. The mighty clan that helped in many great battles bringing down first DI as they died then AA which took them out as they died. They fought in many battles and always turn up when mightier armies clash. The original members Ereptor (unknown, prince), Marbel Woodsmen (deceased, high night), Jedi!? (active, high night), and many others marked under the immortal stars...

So is the legend of TBV.

 Mysterious Guy: I dunno why I'm Sauron. I didn't take nuffin'. Ask TR Shadow why I'm Sauron.

As for you, Fenix... The Age of Emperors is over. This is the Age of Kings. I am now and will always be the Longest-Ruling of the Eight.

 Or can i be Golem...Or Arwen....Anyone!?!


PLEESE!?!

 Old server's still there, bud.  Your title will be mine.

Quote from: Bluemoon_The_WolfOr can i be Golem...Or Arwen....Anyone!?!


PLEESE!?!

Bluemoon, you have a part.  You're in the third scene, Pippen.

Oh, and Stormy, who else could be Sauron?  I thought about making Fenix Sauron, but, you ban people and thats pretty evil :P.

 Act 1: Scene 4

(Menatus enters Ad's house and pauses in the doorframe, noticing the Blade lying innocently on the floor. Camera focuses on an upwards angle of Blood's face as he bends down to pick the thing up. Zoom to his paw as he slowly reaches towards it. Within a few inches of the blade, we see a sudden flash of Stormclaw's eye looking all menacing. Blood yanks his paw back. He moves to a high backed chair and sits down, smoking his pipe. Ad's words echo through his mind: It's mine...my own...my presciousssssssssssssss... We hear him begin to murmur to himself as he stares into the fire. The words "dark" and "prescious" are repeated. Suddenly, Men barges through the door.)

Men: Ad?  Ad! (She notices the Blade on the floor and picks it up. Blur Ad's image and focus on Blood, still muttering to self. We see Men walk to Blood w/ the Blade in her outstretched hand.) He's gone, hasn't he? He talked for so long about leaving... (Blood continues muttering, Men steps closer.) Bloodrath...?

Blood: (surprized and a little nervous. His eyes dart to the blade) Ah, Ad's Blade... (eyes return to Men) He went to live with the squirrls. He's left you Bag End (holds out a paper envelope to Men. Men looks confused, but puts the blade into the envelope(yeah, it's a small blade  =\) Bloodrath immediately closes the envelope and seals it.) Along with all his posessions. (holds out the blade) The Blade is yours now. Keep it out of sight. (Men tucks envelope inside vest thingie)

(Abruptly the shot is interupted as we see Bloodrath walking quickly through Ad's halls, being careful not to hit his head. Men is power walking beside him, it's obviously hard for him to keep up with the long legged fox)

Men: Where are you going?!

Blood: I have some things that need seeing to...

Men: (annoyed and a little angry) What things?

Blood: Questions. Questions that need answering.

(both stop at door)

Men: But you've only just arrived! I don't understand!

Blood: Neither do I. (studies Men for a moment) Keep it secret. Keep it safe.

(Scene shifts to long shot of the castle Barad-dur in Mordor. We see lots of turrets and a magnificiant fortress fully active w/ monster guards and stuff. Fires are flaming up all over the place. Hold shot on middle of castle as we hear the hiss of Wolfbite.)

Wolf: (in pain) Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiire!!! Aaaaaaaaad!!

(Change camera to entrance to fortress. We see the doors burst forth as the Nine emerge, completely in black as HyperActiveAfroWhackers is at the head.)

(Scene shifts again to a moutanious area outside of Salamandastron. We see Bloodrath riding fervently down this path. He stops on the edge of this cliff and we see him look in the direction of Salamandastron. The tops of the Mountains are alight in flame and lighting and it's all dark and scary looking. Turn back to Blood's face, we see him looking very grave. He glances once more at Salamandastron before riding off.)

(End Scene)

 *shakes head* I can NOT believe you called me Men...couldn't you have just used Tania?

 It's too long and hard to type.  On the next scene I'll use something different then.

 Act 1: Scene 5

(It's sunset. Camera sweeps over a huge cathedral-like building.  Flash to Bloodrath power walking down a darkened hall, up some stairs and into the street. We see him being led into a lower level room full of ancient records by Deathclaw. Deathclaw points to a stack of papers and hands Blood the torch. Blood nods gratefully, sets the torch in a holder, and starts attacking the pile of papers, fumbling through old maps, records, journals, etc. Finally, he finds a long sheet of parchment and sits down and we hear him read it aloud...)

Blood: The year is 1989. Here lies the account of The Beatles, King of Gondor and the finder of the Blade. (scene shifts to Beatles looking at Stormy's charcoaled hand still clutching the Blade. He picks it up and breaks off the ashes and holds it.) It has come to me freely and shall remain an heirloom to all who follow me for I do not wish anyone else to posess it. It is...prescious to me....Letters as clear as flame are beginning to disappear, now only flame can reveal them once more...

(scene shifts abruptly to a Vole's home. We see dogs barking angrilly at the darkness. We hear horse hoofs approaching down the path. A nervous, middle aged Vole looks around at the darkness, on edge due to the dogs. We see Ashyra Nightwing stop at the gate. Her entire outfit is black and we cannot see her face due to her cloak.)

Ash: (in creepy whisper) Shire...Ad...

~>John<~:(nervously) Ad?' Er, Ad's gone away I've heard...But Menatus's in Hobbiton! (points rabidly down path) That way!

(shift to Menatus and Aus smiling wearily as the leave a little Vole bar. Aus walks Mena home and we see her approach her home through a camera inside viewing through a window. We see Mena's puzzeled face as she enters her completely dark home. Papers are flying around due to an open window. Mena walks over to shut it when suddenly, a hand reaches out from the shadows and clutches his shoulder.)

Blood: Is it secret? Is it safe?

(Blood looks ragged and worn. He also looks very worried and tired, more old and frail looking. We see Mena bending over a chest and tossing out random objects. Finally, she holds up the envelope containing the Blade((we shall not debate the size of the blade at this time)). Bloodrath immediately snatches it away from her and tosses it into the fire.)

Menatus: (Surprised) What are you doing?!

(Blood says nothing and waits a while as the envelope is burned away revealing the pretty, innocent looking Blade. Finally, he grabs tongs and gently lifts it from the flames. He looks at Mena)

Blood: Hold out your paw, Menatus. I assure you, it's quite cool. (Mena gingerly holds out hand. Blood drops the blade into it.) What can you see? Can you see anything?

Mena: (looking it over) No, nothing...

Blood: Oh... (looks relieved.)

Mena: Wait, I see something! Markings! (We watch as spidery red letters in frosting begin to appear on the Bar) It's some form of Squirralish ((wow))...I can't read it...

Blood: (darkly) There are few who can. It is the language of Salamandastron, though I shall not utter it here...

Mena: Salamandastron?

Blood: In the common tounge it reads "One Blade to rule them all, one Blade to find them. One blade to bring them all and in the darkness bind them."

(Scene shifts to later on. We see the blade lying innocently on the table.)

Blood: (gravely) This IS the one blade. Forged by the hand of the dark lord Stormclaw on within the fires of Salamandastron. Taken by The Beatles from the hand of Stormy himself...

Mena: (in shock) Ad found it... In Wolfbites lair...

Blood: For 6 monthes the blade lay quiet in Ad's keeping, prolonging his life, delaying old age... But no longer. Evil is stirring in the land of Salamandastron. The blade has awoken...it has heard its master's call...

(we hear creepy whisper as a wind blows through the house.)

Mena: (nervous/panicky) But he was killed! Stormclaw was killed by The Beatles a long time ago!

Blood: No, Mena, Stormy's spirit has endeared. You see, his lifeforce is bound to the blade... Stormclaw has returned. Rats have multiplied. His fortres of Barad-dur has been rebuilt. Stormy only needs the Blade to cover the lands like a second darkness... He is seeking it, even now. Seeking it with all thought bent on reaquiring it. The blade yearns to return to the hand of its master, they are one. Menatus... he must NEVER find it...

(Mena immediately gets up and begins walking briskly down the hallway, holding the blade out in front of him lightly.)

Mena: Alright, we'll put it away, keep it hidden and we'll never speak of it again! No one knows it's here, right? (sky says nothing. Mena pauses and looks back at him) Do they Blood?

Blood: (regrettfully) There is one who knew... (sighs) I looked for the creature Wolfbite...but the enemy reached him first...

(Camera flies in to the castle Barad-dur and we see Wolf strapped to some torture device as rats cause him more pain((sorry!)))

Wolf: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

Blood: I don't know how long they tortured him, but amidst the endless screams and ramblings, they were able to discern two words...

Wolf: Shire!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aaaaaaad!!!

Mena: (eyes widen) Shire. Ad. That'll lead them here!

(we see Ashyra Nightwing on the path again, riding fervently down a path. A Vole gatekeeper holds out a lanturn angrilly to view the rider.)

Kyle: Who goes there?!

(Ash pulls out her blade and cuts off the vole's head ((sorry!)) as she rides past. Scene shifts back to Mena and Blood)

Mena: Take it Blood, take it!

Blood: (backs off) No Menatus!

Mena: Take it!

Blood: You cannot offer it to me!

Mena: I'm giving it to you!

Blood: (raises voice) DON'T temp me, Menatus... (voice gets quieter) I dare not take it, not even to keep it safe. For you see, I would use it to do good. But through me, the power would be great and terrible....

Mena: But it cannot stay in the Shire...

Blood: (solomnly) No, it cannot.

Mena: (regrettfully) What must I do?

(end scene)

 How darn cool can this physically get? It's AWESOME!

 haha this is SO awesome lol I can't wait til my next scene! *bows and curtseys*
I cracked up at the amount of "hun"-ing I do... I suppose I do rather have that tendency, though, do I not? *ponders vole-ish-ly*

 Yay!!! I'm the Ringwraith!
Wow, TR, you are an incredible writer...

 Act 1: Scene 6

(Mena begins running to a cabinet, grabbing decks, clothes, food and other important things and shoving them haphazardly into a backpack.)

Blood: You must leave, and leave quickly.

Mena: (strained) Where should I go?

Blood: Out, get out of the Shire. Head for the village of Bree.

Mena: (murmurs) Bree... (looks at Bloodrath) And you?

Blood: I'll be waiting for you there at an inn called 'The Prancing Pony((Any name ideas?))'.

Mena: (concerned) And the blade'll be safe there?

Blood: (sighs) I don't know, Menatus, I just don't know... I must see the head of my order, he is both wise and powerful. Trust me, you shall know what to do. (pause) You must leave the name "Menatus" behind you, that name is not safe outside the Shire. Take the name of "Kalamath" instead. (helps Mena get on cloak) Stay off the road.

Mena: (calculating mentally) I can cut across country easily enough...

Blood: (smiles) My dear Menatus... Voles really are amazing creatures. You can learn everything about their ways in a month yet after a 100 years they can still surprise you...

(We hear the sound of a twig snap. Camera zooms to window where we see the flower bushes rustling a bit.)

Blood: Get down, Menatus (Mena ducks under a table. Blood slowly approaches the window, staff in front of him like a lance. Once he is at the window, he stabs at the bushes with his staff. A muffled "Ooof!" is heard. Blood tosses his staff aside and yanks Austen by the collar into the house and slams him onto the table.)

Blood: (VERY angry) Counfounded Austen! Have you been eavesdropping?!!

Aus: (seriously shooken up) I ain't been dropping no eaves... I was just cutting the grass... (smiles nervously)

Blood: (still angry, but not as much) A little LATE for trimming the bushes, hmmmmm?

Aus: (more nervous) I-I heard raised voices!

Blood: (very angry again) What did you hear?! SPEAK!

Aus: (VERY shaken) Nuthin sir, well, nuthin important! That is, I heard a great deal about a blade and a dark Admin and something about the end of the forums, but please Mr. Bloodrath, sir, don't hurt me! Don't turn me into anything....unnatural.

Blood: (raises eyebrows) No...? Perhaps not... (smiles mischeviously) I've got a better use for you...

(It is now dawn. We see Blood leading a horse against a background of the rising sun.)

Blood: Come along then, Aus, keep up!

(Scene changes to later on in the day. The party is in a pretty foresty area.)

Blood: (gravely) Be careful, both of you. The enemy has many spies...Birds, beasts...Trees... (Mena looks around herself nervously as if being watched by invisible enemies) Is it safe?

(Mena pats the pocket of his tunic where the blade is resting. Blood nods)

Blood: Never squeeze it. Agents of the dark lord will be drawn to its power. Always remember, the blade is trying to get back to its master. It wants to be found.

(Blood rears up on his horse and rides off into the distance. We hear a creepy bird screech which scares the crap outta Aus and Mena.)

(Jump to the voles crossing an impressive countryside, then a small brook, then a farmer's field as the day goes on. As they are walking through a small field of wheat, Aus suddenly stops by a scarecrow resembling Blackhawkhiro.)

Aus: (solomnly) This is it.

Mena: This is what?

Aus: If I take 1 more step it'll be the farthest from home that I've ever been...

(Mena pauses and walks back to Aus. She grabs Aus by the shoulder and points him down the path.)

Mena: C'mon Aus...

(Aus pauses meaningfully before taking a step over the imaginary line. Mena smiles and the voles continue through the field.)

Mena: Remember what Ad used to say? It's a dangerous...(shift to Ad's voice as we see the voles continue down their path)

Ad: ...business Menatus, going out into the world. You step onto the road, and if you don't keep your feet, there's no knowing where you'll be swept off to...

(Scene shifts to Ashyra Nightwing on a cliff overlooking a forest and menacing music plays.

(End of Act 1)

Yes!  We're done with act one.  The voles have left the Shire.  I hope you enjoyed so far.  There's still a heck of a lot more to do.

 you should call the prancing pony the swimming otter or something

 Ok, I'm happy to be past scene 1, but I'm not sure now wheather to contenue it or not.  I started a poll in the poll forums to see what ya'll thought I should do.

 Hey wait!

If I am gollum, then I get the majik blade in the end.

I win!!!

Wolf Bite

 Act 2: Scene 1

(We see Bloodrath galloping furiously over a field. Pan back so we see him heading towards a path which leads to this massive tower. We hear Fenix's voice over the tension music.)

Fenix: Smoke rises from Salamandastron...The hour grows late as Bloodrath the Grey rides to Isengard, seeking my council... (we see Fenix walk down the steps of Orthanc where Blood gets off his horse.)(Speaking normally) For that is why you have come, is it not? (pause, smiles) My old friend...

Blood: (Smiles) Fenix... (bows head slightly)

(We see Fenix and Blood walking along a path in a garden-like area.)

Fen: Are you sure?

Blood: (gravely) Beyond any doubt.

Fen: (musing) So the Blade of Power has been found...

Blood: All these long years it has been in the Shire... Under my very nose, no less!

Fen: (coldly) Yet you did not have the wits to see it. Your love for the halflings blinds you, Bloodrath, slowing your mind and clouding your judgement.

Blood: (slightly hurt) But we still have time to counter Stormclaw if we act quickly...

Fen: Time? What time do you think we have?

(flash to inside Orthanc. Bloodrath and Fenix are sipping cups of tea.)

Fen: (gravely) Stormclaw has regained much of his former stregnth. He cannot yet take physical form, but his spirit has lost none of it's potency (sneers at "potency"). Concealed within his fortress, the lord of Salamandastron sees all. His gaze pierces clouds, shadow, earth, and flesh... (takes sip of tea, regarding Blood thoughtfully) You know of what I speak, Bloodrath... A great rodent, dark as the darkest shadow, radiating of vile and evil energy. He is gathering all evil to him. Pretty soon he shall have an army large enough to launch an assault on RWL.

Blood: (awed and slightly afraid) You know this...how?

Fenix: (smugly) I have seen it.

(Fen is seen leading Blood into a room where a pedastal is centered.)

Blood: The lamphear is a dangerous tool, Keirin.

Fen: Why? Why should we be afraid to use it?

(Fen removes the sheet to reveal a darkened orb.)

Blood: (angry whisper) The lost seeing stones haven't been all accounted for yet! (drops voice) We don't know who else could be watching on the other side!

(Bloodrath whips sheet over the orb. As soon as the sheet touches the orb Blood is wracked by a flash of the eye. Fenix calmly moves to his throne and sits down.)

Fen: (anoyed) The hour is later than you think, my old friend. Stormclaw's forces are moving. The Nine have already left Salamandastron.

Blood: (shocked) The Nine?!!

Fen: They left on Midsummer's Eve, disguised as riders in black. (sneers) They'll find the One Blade, and kill whomever carries it.

Blood: Menatus! (Blood runs for the door behind him. Just as he is about to reach it, it shuts before him by some unseen force. Blood frowns and moves towards one of the other doors. We see Fenix smile as he nods towards the door Blood is heading towards. Again the door closes. Fenix nods at each of the remaining doors and, again, they all close. Blood turns to Fenix in surprise and slight fear.)

Fen: (rises) You don't think a mere Vole can stand up to the power of Stormclaw, do you? There are NONE who can. Against the power of Salamandastron, there can be no victor. (pause) We must join with him. We must join with Stormclaw. It would be wise, my friend.

Blood: (sadly) Tell me, friend, when did Fenix the Wise abandon reason for madness?

(Fenix yells suddenly as Bloodrath is thrown against the back wall. Fenix begins to approach Blood cautiously, yet Blood suddenly raises his staff, landing a blow to Fen's chest, causing him to catapault backwards. Fen manages to to knock Blood over again. Blood staggers to his feet and flings Fenix into a wall. Fenix hits Blood in such a way that he spins in midair before hitting the ground.  Fenix LITERALLY begins wiping the floor with Blood, moving him back and forth along the tiles.  Blood finally regains his bearings long enough to fling Fenix through the door and into the next room. Fen gets up slowly and holds out his hand. Suddenly, Blood's staff is taken out of his grasp and into Fen's awaiting hand. Fen rises fully and knocks Blood to the ground once more. He slowly begins to approach Blood with both staffs in hand.)

Fen: I gave you a chance, willingly! But you...you chose the way of PAIN!

(Bloodrath begins spinning around on the ground violently, slowly spinning up towards the cieling. Fenix smiles malisciously as Blood's ascent quickens and the ceiling is only a short distance away. Blood screams.)

(End Scene)

 Josh so evil. How unlike him! =P

Oh no! How terrible! the story has taken a turn for the worse!

 Is "Wolf" me?

 No, wolf is wolfbite.  Blue is you.

 we should let tr finish it with out us making replies its faster to find the next one that way

 Meh, I like seeing your comments.

 I absolutely LOVE to story! It's excellent, it's amazing! I heart it! ^___^!

There, comments! =D

 I haven't read it- can't find the bit "Holbs" is mentioned.

 

QuoteHey wait!

If I am gollum, then I get the majik blade in the end.

I win!!!

Wolf Bite

SPOILERS AHEAD FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO HAVEN'T READ THE BOOKS!






actually, wolf bite, gollum gets the sword, but he is thrown into the deep fires of Salamandastron. he dies. tough luck. boohoo. but he does take frodo's finger with him.

 Heehee, that's almost totally hilarious...I can't wait till I show up....write the next part soon!

 hehe, we show up at the same time, it will be cool. What kind of RWl species do you think you will be?

 yeah i wonder what i will be

 elf-squirrel
hobbit-vole
human-mouse
wizard-fox
orc-rat
troll-evil badger

 i'm a mousey

 I was thinking about these:

Human: Hare or Mouse
Elf: Squirrel
Dwarf: Mole
Hobbit: Vole(duh)
Orc: Flitcheye(hehe, i like that one)
Urak-ki: Stoat
Goblin: Ferret
Treebeard guys: Badgers

Those were some I thought that would fit pretty well

 tr told me what i said but we forgot dwarves, but they should be moles

 by treebeard guys, you mean the Ents, correct?

teehee! I watched the LOTR:FOTR movie this afternoon... much fun....

 Umm, yeah, sorry I didn't do a scene yesterday.  I had to babysit two little boys like all day.  Ok, here it is:

Act 2: Scene 2

(We see Aus emerge from some corn and onto a dusty path. He looks around nervously at the corn as Mena isn't there.)

Aus: Ms. Menatus? (jogs a bit down the path. Frantically) Ms. Menatus???

(Mena pops out of the corn in front of him. Aus breathes a sigh of relief which only confuses Mena)

Aus: I thought I'd lost you...

Mena: What're you talking about?

Aus: (shrugs) It's something Bloodrath told me...

Mena: (interested) What did he say?

Aus: 'Don't you loose him, Austen.' (determined) And I don't mean to.

Mena: (lightly) Crim, we're still in the Shire! What could possibly happen???

(Calria and Bluemoon_the_wolf suddenly burst out of the cornfield wall, landing on Aus and Mena. Both are laden with food which goes flying all over the place as they collide)

Blue: (getting up) Menatus? Hey, Calria, look, it's Menatus!

Cal: Why hello, Mena.

Aus: Go away (grabs Blue by the collar and tosses him at the corn. He then helps Mena to her feet.)

Mena: (looking at the scattered food) What is the meaning of this?

(Cal and Blue hastily pick up the food, shoving it into their coatpockets.)

Aus: (astounded) You've been into Orcrist's garden!

(Strained cursing and threats are heard as we see a scythe approaching our heros through the corn. Cal and Blue exchange nervous glances.)

Blue: (to Aus) Hold these (shoves the food at him. Aus takes it, not sure what to do. Cal grabs Mena and shoves her into the corn, Blue quickly running after. Aus stands there for a moment, dazed and confused while holding lotsa food. We see the scythe is closer now and the sound of dogs barking is heard.)

Orcrist: Get back here you mangy devils! I'll get you yet! I'll teach you a lesson for stealing from ME!

(It finally dawns on Aus that he is holding stolen materials and an angry man holding a scythe is quickly approaching his present location. He quickly drops the food and jumps into the corn, running to catch up with the others.)

Cal: I don't see why he's so upset, hun, I mean, we only took a couple of Carrotts-

Blue: And some ale. And then there were those scones we borrowed last week... Oh yeah, and the Cordial the week before!

Cal: (exasperatedly) Yes, Austen, I know, but we needed them! My point is, it's nothing to get so ****** off about! He is clearly overreacting. (dogs are heard coming closer to the voles) Run faster!

(The field ends and we see that it is actually on a hill/plateau and there is a steep drop. The voles, unfortunately, do not know this and continue running from their pursuer. Bluemoon arrives at the edge, windmilling his arms to keep his balance. He somehow manages to do it, when suddenly, Mena and Cal crash into him. The three of them teter on the edge until Aus comes along and plows smack into them. All the voles fall off the edge, landing onto the road.)

Bluemoon: (looking at a pile of horse manure not far from his face) Wow, that was close.

Cal: Owww....I think I've broken something... (reaches behind her back and pulls out a stick that's bent over.)

Blue: That was just a detour--A shortcut if you will!

Aus: Shortcut?! HA! (looks around) Shortcut to what??

Cal: (happily) Mushrooms! (scrambles to her feet and runs to the mushrooms. Cal and Aus follow the suite.)

(Mena rolls her eyes and looks around the road. Strange whispy voices are heard whispering something in the language of Mordor)

Mena: I think we should get off the road......

(The voles ignore her, continuing to chow down on the mushrooms. Mena frowns and looks down the road. We hear an unearthly screech and see as the road darkens. The end of the road begins to ripple as a mysterious wind picks up.)

Mena: (panicky) Get off the road! Quick!

(the voles scramble to this hollow on the side of the road made from the roots of the tree. Mena attempts to shrink herself up against the wall while the others fight over the sac of mushrooms.)

Mena: Quiet!

(Ashyra Nightwing appears above them in black riding a dark horse slowly down the road. She pauses above the hollow the voles are hiding in. Mena looks up through a hole in the hollow and sees the horse's hooves paw at the ground, it's foaming mouth and red eyes... Mena looks away in fright as Ash dismounts. She bends over the hollow so we can't see her face, but we hear her sniffing the air for...something. The voles stare stonily ahead, to scared to move as creepy insects and other disgusting creatures begin to appear around them. Mena slowly retrieves the blade from her pocket, starting to get a firm grip on it. Ash senses this and leans closer to the hollow, sniffing intently. It looks as if Mena is in some sort of trance. Aus casts her a worried glance and punches her in the arm. Mena releases his hold on the blade as Ash hisses and looks away. Cal grabs the sac of mushrooms from Blue and tosses them out of the hollow, causing a noise to be heard away from them. Ash hisses again and rides off after where Cal threw the mushrooms. The Voles wait a couple seconds to be sure he's truly gone before they race off into the forest. Suddenly, Blue trips, causing the group to stop and catch their breath as he gets to his feet. )

Blue: What was that?!!

(Mena says nothing and looks at the blade in her hand. Close in on the blade and end scene)

 I'm Sam!!!! Cool! *knows he said it already, but is hapier than ever he didn't goof up his lines*

 Hee! Loving the story! BTW, it's Austin not Austen. But loving the story!  =D=D=D!!!

 i think we all are loveing menatus

 *dances in a Shire-like fashion*

I feel all smart for the mushrooms lol!

Such a waste of good mushrooms, though...

  Am I in this somwhere? :D

I think your doing a great  job at this!!!!(It's not pokemon, thank God!!) :rolleyes:  

 when is scene 3 going to be done or did you stop making it?

 No, I haven't stopped; I'm just a slow loser =\.

Act 2: Scene 3

(The voles are still in the forest except it is night now. A mysterious fog is rolling around the forest floor as the camera pans across the scenery to set the mood. We see the silohette(sp?) of Ashyra Nightwing as she moves on through the shadows. We watch as, led by Menatus, the voles move from tree to tree, sorta stumbling in the dark.)

Calria: Anything?

Mena: (looks around) No, nothing.

Blue: (tired) What is going on?

Cal: (suspiciously) Those black riders were looking for something....or someone...Mena?

Blue: Get down!

(The voles immediately dodge behind a small bush and look towards the hilltop. We see Ash ride, silohetted in the light, look around, and then ride off in the opposite direction as the voles.)

Mena: I have to get out of the Shire. (Cal is startled at this revelation) Aus and I must get to Bree.

Cal: (nods slowly) Right... Buckleberry Ferry, c'mon dear!

(Cal leads the voles off into the forest somewhat blindly as they occasionally stumble over roots and stuff. Suddenly, Ashyra Nightwing pops out from behind a tree, cutting off Mena from the others. Aus, Cal and Blue try to distract Ash by shouting at her horse, it rears but he stays in front of Mena. Mena motions for them to go as he somehow manages to get around Ash.)

Blue: (looking behind him) Run Mena!!

Cal: (to Aus and Blue) This way! Follow me!

(Cal and Co hop over a small fence and we see the ferry a couple feet from them. The all run down the dock and onto the ferry, looking anxiously behind them all the while. )

Cal: Get the rope, hun!

(Aus and Cal frantically undo the ropes anchoring the ferry as Bluemoon_the_Wolf looks down the path for any sign of Mena or Ash. Once Aus's done with his side of the ferry, he looks at the path.)

Aus: Menatus!

(We see Mena running for the ferry, Ash closely on her heels.)

Mena: Go!

(Blue and Cal push the ferry off the dock as Mena continues to run from Ash.)

Cal: Run Darlin'!!!

Blue: Faster!!

Aus: Hurry Menatus!!

(Mena nears the ferry and jumps onto it, causing all the voles to fall into a heap. Ash halts and hisses in the middle of the bridge. Her horse rears slightly as he turns back to the path.)

Mena: (breathless) How far to the nearest crossing?

Cal: Brandywine Bridge, 20 miles...

(The voles are now across the river and hiding behind a tree. It is raining now as they look around nervously for signs of the riders approaching. Finally, Mena runs up to the gate, Aus, Blue and Cal followed closely behind her. Mena takes a deep breath and knocks on the gate. We see the wet and somewhat annoyed face of Shadow Giant looking through a top window, frowns, closes the window and opens a Vole height window. He sees the voles standing in the rain and a puzzled frown crosses his face as he opens the gate door.)

Shad: Voles...4 jolly voles. (pauses, looking them over) And what bally business brings you to Bree?

Mena: (shivering slightly due to the rain) We wish to stay at the inn called the Swimming Otter. Our business is our own.

Shad: (disgruntled) Alrighty marm, I meant no offense m'gal. (stands aside to let voles in) There's talk of strange folk abroad, can't be to careful, wot wot?

(We watch as the voles meander through the streets of Bree, the Voles, hares, mice, hedgehogs, and otters of the town (random peeps as I don't feel like hunting down people to play the parts) shoving them aside and generally being rather mean to the poor voles. Eventually, they come to the Swimming Otter. Focus on the sign and fade to next scene.)

(End scene)

 Yay, more story! *glomphs*

 *applauds, patiently waiting for the Rivendell scene to come up*

 Wow, I thought I was going to quit, but my fingers got that feeling in them where I HAD to type up something, so, here it is!

Act 2: Scene 4

(The party goes into the Swimming Otter looking slightly amazed at all the mice walking around the common room. Mena tentatively approaches the main desk where we see Razorclaw looking at the latest issue of Terrouge. )

Mena: (clears throat) Uh...Um...'Scuse me, sir?

Razor: (looks up, startled) G'evenin little masters, what can I do for you? If you're lookin' fer accomodations, I've got some jolly nice vole sized rooms available fer ya, wot wot!  Ms... Ms, uh...?

Mena: Kalamath, my name's Kalamath.

Razor: (to self) Kalamath...

Mena: (brightly) We're friends of Bloodrath the Grey. Can you tell him we've arrived?

Razor: (frowns) Bloodrath? Bloodrath.... (thinks) Oh! Bloodrath! Pretty tall chap, big grey hat? (Mena nods and breaths a sigh of relief) Not seen him fer 2 weeks...

(voles' faces fall as they move away from the desk.)

Aus: What do we do now?

(pan around the room as we see a bunch of drunk rodents as well as 2 suspicious looking characters glancing at the vole party. We see voles all sitting glumly at a table taking sips of October ale.)

Mena: (comfortingly) Aus, he'll be here, he'll come.

(We see the 2 suspicious characters glance over at the voles as Cal brings over a pint of ale. Cal sets it down gently on the table, but some still slooshes out anyway.)

Bluemoon: (amazed) Wazzat?!

Cal: This, dear, is a pint (sips it)

Blue: (awestruck) It comes in pints?

Cal: (through mug) Mmfph!

Blue: (determined) I'm getting one!

Aus: You've had half of that already!!

(Suspiscious looking dudes watch as Blue runs off. We see Raine briefly sitting in the corner cloaked in shadows before returning to the voles.)

Aus: That guy's done nothing but stare at you since we've arrived...

Cal: (hiccoughs loudly, still sipping ale) Maybe he fancies ya, hun....

(Mena glares at Cal. Razorclaw walks buy w/ a tray of dirty dishes.)

Mena: (to Razor) That mouse over there in the corner--who is he?

(Razor looks over to where Mena's gestering. We see Raine smile evilly and raise his pipe in a sarcastic salute)

Razor: (in a lowered voice) He's one o' them Rangers. Dangerous chaps they jolly well are, wanderin' the wild. Don't know what his bally name is, but 'round these parts folks call him 'Strider' wot wot!

Mena: (whispers) Raine.... (we see her holding the Blade beneath the table. The blade calls out to her, whispering her name. We see Raine lean over curiously in his corner as the whispers of the Blade pull Tashi into a sort of trance.)

Blue: (by bar) Menatus? 'Course I know Menatus! Yup, Menatus of Hope, right over there! (points to Mena. Mena is immediately shaken from trance as she tries to rush over to Blue) Ya know, I was once in Hope, too. Only secondary Diplamat---

(Mena pulls Blue's collar.)

Mena: Bluemoon_the_wolf!!!!

Bluemoon_The_Wolf: (innocently) What? What did I-- (Mena trips over her own toe (sorry, couldn't resist, Tania ;p ) and starts to fall over slo-mo style. We see the Blade fly up out of her pocket and up into the air. At this, both Raine and the suspiscious dudes lean over where they're sitting to get a better look. Mena snatches the blade from the air, clasping it tightly. Immediately, she disappears. The whole room lets out a gasp as she vanishes, causing Raine to nearly drop his pipe. Flash to scene of the ferretts riding along a dark road. There are 4 of them; Ashyra Nightwing, Germania, Trident, and MantisMan. Immediately they turn as if pulled by some unseen force and ride rabidly down the road. We see Mena in this weird blurry vision of our world, like if you took a picture of the real world and used Photoshop's smear tool on it. She stumbles around blindly, attempting to get to his feet when suddenly Stormclaw appears in front of him)

Stormy: You cannot hiiiide from mee...I see you...There is no other life in this void....I'll get you Menatus...and your little vole friends too!

(Mena immediately lets go the Blade, hastily dropping it into her pocket. She leans up against a pillar and starts panting heavily. Suddenly, Raine yanks her up by the collar.)

Raine:(sneers) That was quite a nice little stunt you pulled back there Ms. Kalamath. You draw far to much attention to yourself...

(We see him pushing Mena up the stairs. Raine checks the hallway for enemies before shoving Mena into an empty room.)

Mena: What do you want?

Raine: (paces around the room) A little more caution from you--that's no trinket you carry.

Mena: I carry nothing

Raine: Indeed. (pause) I can avoid being seen if I wish, (puts out candles) but to avoid being seen entirely? That is a rare gift. (he removes his hood so we can see his face fully in the light.)

Mena: Who are you?

Raine: (smiles) Are you frightened?

Mena: (Nervously) Yes.

Raine: (smiles sadly) Not nearly frightened enough. I know what hunts you. (We hear a loud racket towards the door. Raine draws his sword as Mena dodges behind a desk. Suddenly Aus barges into the room, fists balled and ready, with Cal and Blue backing him up.)

Aus: Let him go or die...And I know it isn't in Gods will to fight!!

Raine: (sheaths sword) You have a stout heart, but it won't save you. (to Mena) You can't wait for your Fox friend, Satoshi, they're coming.

(The sound of horse's hooves is heard in the distance. We see Deathclaw relaxing in his little house reading Outcast of Redwall when he sighs and goes to see who's approaching the gate. As soon as he opens the little window to see outside, we see his eyes bulge out as the gate is immediately overrun by the Ferretts. We then see the ferretts move through the town silently like shadows as everyone lies asleep in their homes. They silently creep into the Swimming Otter as Razorclaw sits terrified behind his desk. We next see the ferretts enter a room, flip briefly to a sleeping Bluemoon, then back to see each of the ferretts (Ash, Germ, tri, Mantis) has drawn their sword. We see Aus roll over as each of the ferretts position themselves so that their blades are directly above the hearts of their vole victems. Music builds to increase tension as each of the ferretts stab their bed, continuing to do so as feathers spew all over the place. We see Aus awake with a start, then pan out so Mena and Raine are included in the frame. Each is looking anxiously at the Swimming Otter across the street, wincing at the unearthly screams of the ferretts. Raine's hand remains poised on his weapon as we switch back to the room the ferretts are in. Germ suddenly pulls the covers off his bed, revealing that him and the others were stabbing at pillows strategically placed to resemble the forms of sleeping voles. All the ferretts let out that shriek before completely trashing the room. We now see that all the voles are awake across the street.

Mena: (quietly) What are they?

Raine: (sadly) They were once mice. Great Kings of mice. Then Stormy the deciever gave to them 9 Blades of power. Blinded by their greed, they accepted the Blades without question, 1 by 1 falling into the darkness. They are slaves to the will of Stormy, controlled by the Blades that tie their souls to him. They are the Nazgul--Bladewraiths, neither living nor dead. At all times they feel the presence of the Blade, drawn to its power. (lowers his voice) They will never stop hunting you...

(end scene)

*Wipes forhead* Whew!  I may actually contenue this.  I've had sevrel peeps ask me to.  So, well, I guess ya'll can expect the next scene up soon =).

~TR Shadow~

 continue continue! i want to be in it. could i be like elrond? or gimli? or legolas? or anyone else! please!

 I...tripped...on...my...toe!? XD! I absolutely love the story. In fact, I'm gonna take the story and paste it on some random website host so that when we look through it we won't have to see all the comments (plus I don't want my name to be Men).

Umm...a little suggestion...I don't think you should have to make peoples' names appear exactly as they are. For instance, when I'm calling Bluemoon_the_Wolf, just say Bluemoon for long (Blue for short). Otherwise it looks weird.

Heh heh, I'm Klamath.

 *dies laughing* That's fantastic! It's just the part with Raine that I find hilarious...*grins* I'm glad I picked him...

 Maaaannn..... I'm the innkeeper. Doesn't he get killed by the Black Riders? *Squeals in agony, then flops over dramatically and "dies"*

 To my Knowlege of the LOTR he doesn't die.

 he doesn't die. the gate keeper does i think. but he is in the third book when they return to hobbiton. so he doesn't die in the whole series.

 

Quote from: TR Shadow~>John<~:(nervously) Ad?' Er, Ad's gone away I've heard...But Menatus's in Hobbiton! (points rabidly down path) That way!

ok, sorry, but PLEASE give that role to somebody else and make me Theoden or summat!!!

EDIT: Good reason to make me Theoden. I died in the Age of Emperors, and Theoden dies in the 3rd book. In the mean time, [books 2-3 until I die] It'd be fun to see me as an old man possessed by Fenix...hehheh

 I want to be Boromir, "Frodo, give me the  RING!!!!!!!!!!!"

 Act 2: Scene 5

(We see the Bladewraiths riding rabidly through a pretty foresty scene before it shifts abruptly to that of our heroes traveling up a hill. We see the wraiths riding up the hill again, giving the appearance that they're right on the trail of the party (which they are) But, again it changes to the party treking up their hill.)

Mena: (slightly out of breath) Where are you taking us?

Raine: (mysteriously) Into the wild.

(The party continues up the hill. As Raine moves out of sight, our attention is drawn to the voles struggling over tree roots and the incline)

Cal:(distrustingly) But how do we know this Raine is REALLY a friend of Bloodrath's?

Mena: (tiredly) I guess we have no choice but to trust him...

Aus: But where is he leading us?

Raine: (up ahead, out of our line of sight) To Mossflower, Master Austin.

Aus: (excited) Mossflower?! Did you hear that?! We're going to see the squirrels!

(Bring camera back to focus on Raine who smiles at Aus's jubilation as he continues leading the voles on as they walk over the crest of the hill. Pan across hilltop then out before switching to the voles on a semi-snowy hill.)

(We see Raine stand on a small boulder to look around while in the background the voles are getting pots and pans out. Raine turns around abruptly, slightly annoyed.)

Rain: Gentlemen...err...and ladies, we do not stop until nightfall.

Bluemoon: What about breakfast?

Rain: (firm) You've already had it.

Blue: (indignant) We've had 1, yes, but what about second breakfast?

(Rain continues walking. Cal walks up beside him and puts an arm around his shoulder.)

Cal: I don't think he knows about 2nd breakfast, hun.

Blue: (paniced) What about ellevenseys? Luncheon? Afternoon tea? Dinner? Supper? He knows about them, right?????

Cal: (sadly) Wouldn't count on it...

(Suddenly, an apple is thrown from Rain's direction. Cal grins and catches it, handing it to Blue before walking off. Blue looks up briefly just in time to see another apple come flying right into his eye. He rubs his head before continuing on.)

(end scene)

 you book, be number one on asian west sigh e!

with asian accent! lol, so my friend has an asian accent.

 *claps* Yes! Just a couple more scenes and I show up... :P  

 can i be a part? i mean dead eye is an archer name. maybe i could be legolas?

 YAY ONLY LIKE 5 MORE ACTS AND WE FINALLY SEE ME, THEODEN, POSSESSED BY FENIX

 You already played the gatekeeper.

 HEH HEH I KNOW.

Apparently Julie thinks she can cast me as both.....but I'm definitely Theoden

 I'M Legolas...I wouldn't have minded being Arwen or Galadriel, as long as it's an elf. ^_^

Quote from: ~>John<~HEH HEH I KNOW.

Apparently Julie thinks she can cast me as both.....but I'm definitely Theoden

Oh, ok.  I thought you wanted the part.  *Sigh* Now I need someone to play Theoden.

Quote from: TR Shadow

Quote from: ~>John<~HEH HEH I KNOW.

Apparently Julie thinks she can cast me as both.....but I'm definitely Theoden

Oh, ok.  I thought you wanted the part.  *Sigh* Now I need someone to play Theoden.

IM THEODEN!!!!!

 i just want a part! how about gimli?

 Act 2: Scene 5

(We see Fenix's hand poised over that orb thingie as a bunch of pretty colors swirl around eventually gathering together to form a wicked cool looking gengar. As he continues to wave his hand around the orb, the shape of gengar gradually defines itself more fully and we hear all these creepy dark whispers.)

Fenix: (regally) The power of Isengard is at your command, Stormclaw, Lord of the Earth.

Storm: (Whispering darkly) Build me an army worthy of Salamandastron...

(We see Fenix sitting by himself at the table Blood and himself had shared drinks at not long before. He seems to be in deep thought, contemplating something, when 2 orcs appear hesitantly waiting for some sign of recognition before fully entering the room. Fen glances up wearily and we recognize the rat to be Ladysnaketoung and Pokeymanns who both stand before Fenix.)

Pokeymanns: What orders from Salamandastron, my lord, what does Stormclaw command?

Snake (Girl, your name is way too long ;) ): We have work to do...

(We see hundreds of rats tying heavy ropes around trees and then pulling them out of the ground. Each time a tree falls to the ground it emits an unearthly groan. Scene abruptly shifts to Bloodrath
laying down on cold stone, bruised and bloody. He is attacked by a small fit of coughing before he struggles to his feet, realizing he's actually on top of Fenix's tower. It begins to rain as the camera pans out for a disturbing shot of all the fires and destruction around Isengard while Blood trudges over to one of the pillars in the tower for some shelter from the rain.)

Snake: (To Fenix as they watch a tree fall) The trees are strong, my lord, their roots go down deep.

Fenix: (flatly) Rip them all down.

(Sweep camera around the destruction and close on Bloodrath's look of despair as he sits on the top of the tower in misery.)

(End Scene)

^ Short, lol.

 Dang! Now I don't even get to be Saruman. Come on, how about Boromir? Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaase?

 Gimli! I want to be gimli!

 Sorry guys.  This is how the casting for the larger parts is right now:

Frodo: Menatus
Gandalf: Bloodrath
Bilbo: Ad
Merry: Calria
Pippen: Bluemoon_the_wolf
Sam: General Austen
Gollum: Wolfbite
Legolas: Shael
Gimli: Wickedclaw
Aragorn: Bloodwake
Borameir: Kilkenne
Sauromon: Fenix
Sauron: Stormclaw
Strider: Raine

 Oh. that is not cool. no part for dead eye.wait! could i be elrond!

 Yeah, and I could be that Boromir's brother dude! Can, can I? Pleeease?

 I was left out?
:)

 Hey, maybe you'll get a part later on. Like I will, when I'm Boromir's brother who's-name-I-can't-quite-recall!

 As i have read lotr a million times, bormair's brother is Captain Faramiar of Gondor

 I believe it's Faramir, but still. I want to be him!

 I want Elrond! Or maybe a Rohan person.  

 Sure, you can be the princess! Heehee *runs away as DeadEye comes running at him wielding a javelin*

 *chases RazorClaw, having two javelins*

I will kill you!

 OK, in that case I'll stop. *stops, turns around, wielding an axe, and cuts DeadEye in half*

Quote from: TR ShadowSorry guys.  This is how the casting for the larger parts is right now:

Frodo: Menatus
Gandalf: Bloodrath
Bilbo: Ad
Merry: Calria
Pippen: Bluemoon_the_wolf
Sam: General Austen
Gollum: Wolfbite
Legolas: Shael
Gimli: Wickedclaw
Aragorn: Bloodwake
Borameir: Kilkenne
Sauromon: Fenix
Sauron: Stormclaw
Strider: Raine

IM THEODEN

 Yeah, and I'm the Wizard of Oz. No, just kidding, but I want to be Faramir, he's cool.

 No worries, Holby can be cast as a tree or sheep.
Either's fine, as long as I get my pay cheque...

 ~Gives Holbs her pay~

 *Accepts his pay* (Ragefur did the same thing, ya know.)

 Did you now Ragefur.  ~He wondered~

 Holbs could be the bag of mushrooms that I chunked at that ring wraith...

 No! Mushrooms make my mouth itchy! Anything but the mushrooms!

 Act 3: Scene 1

(We see our heroes trekking across this barran grassland. All around them are huge boulders that faintly resemble monolithes of a dead civilization. Raine suddenly pauses and climbs atop a boulder to get a better view of this big mesa (or is it a plateau?).)

Raine: (wistfully) This was once the great watch tower of Amun Soon (sp?) (To the voles) We will rest here for the night.

(The voles stagger into this cave around the midpoint of Weathertop, utterly exausted. They spare only seconds to shrug off their bags before collapsing onto the ground. Raine smiles sardonically before going outside of the cave to see the setting sun. We see a beatiful shot of Weathertop against a crimson sky, Raine's profile shadowed against the fading colors of the sun. Raine sighs for a moment before stepping back inside the cave. He pulls out four small bundles from a satchel, tossing one to each vole. The voles unwrap their bundles in curiosity, revealing slightly worn squirrelish knives. )

Raine: These are for you. Keep them close. (He looks over at the cave entrance) I'm going to have a look around. Stay here. (exits)

(We see Mena sleeping somewhat fitfully as hushed whispers are heard in the background. Mena groans and opens her eyes, determined to see the cause of the disturbance. We see the other voles sitting around a small campfire cooking something and laughing.)

Mena:(panicked) What the h***are you doing?!!

Bluemoon: (happily) Fresh biscuits and crispy bacon!

Austin: We saved some for you, Ms. Menatus.

Mena: (close to bursting an artery) Put it out you fools, put it out!

(Mena steps on the fire vigoriously, spreading sparks everywhere as the voles protest. We see another shot of the outside of Weathertop with the cave faintly glowing. Suddenly, the silence of the night is broken by an unearthly scream. The voles pile out of the cave immediately to investigate. 4 ferrets are seen moving towards the base of the hill. Each of the voles draw their blades nervously, completely terrified of the creatures below. )

Mena: Go! (pushes the other voles up the path.)

(At the top of the mesa/plateau is what remains of the watchtower--a stonehenge-like arrangement of worn pillars and monolithes. The voles anxiously back away from the path they arrived from as the black hoods of the four approaching wraiths. Each of the wraiths draws their sword, forming a sort of V shape with Ashyra and Mark in the middle, Rough Raiders and Hunny Bunny flanking either side. All are in no hurry as they know they have their prey conered.)

Aus: Back you devils!! (He rushes at Ash head on, not caring about what happens to him, only wishing to save his friend. Ash defeats him in two moves, causing the vole to fly about eight feet. Calria and Bluemoon step forward in front of Mena nervously, deciding to act as more of a wall than actual combatants.  Rough Raiders and Hunny Bunny push them aside as Mark steps towards Mena. Mena backs up in fear, then trips over her foot again and falls. She continues to scramble away from Mark until his back touches the solid stone of a pillar. Mena hears the blade whisper to her and pulls it out of her pocket. Mark hisses and draws a knife, continuing to minimize the distance between himself and the vole. Mena takes a deep breath as she is overcome by that weird trance again, grabbing ahold of the bar. Immediately she's immersed in that weird windy/shadowy world of invisibility and notices all the ferrets in white robes. Each's face is visible as well as the crowns and jewelry they wore as kings of their respective lands. Mark raises his hand, and Mena notices that the hand holding the blade is slowly drawn to the ferret's. Gritting her teeth, she yanks the blade back to herself, clutching it protectively against his chest. Mark hisses angrily and stabs Mena near her collarbone with the knife. Mena screams in pain, yet then Raine dashes forward brandishing a flaming torch in one paw and his sword in the other, pushing the ferrets away from the fallen vole. Mena relaxes her hold on the blade as she loses consciousness. As soon as she reappears, Aus dashes to her side from where he was crouched behind a rock.)

Aus: Menatus!!! (wipes sweat off his brow.)

(In the meantime, a tremendous 4 on 1 battle between Raine and the ferrets is going on. Raine manages to set Hunny Bunny on fire who then runs around and accidently crashes into Mark whose robes quickly catch fire as well. Both ferrets jump off over the edge. Raine evades swipes from the blade of Rough raider's sword as Ash quietly edges towards the voles. Raine ducks to avoid a blow, returning it with his torch. Rough is quickly set aflame and follows his shadow bretheren off the edge. Raine pauses, then whips the torch at Ash. The torch nails the ferret right in the face, whereby she jumps off the edge)

Mena: (wearily) Austin....

Aus: (scared) RAINE!!!!!!!!!!

Raine: (rushes foward to kneel by Mena's side. He picks up the knife that stabbed the poor vole in disgust.) She's been stabbed by a Salamandastron blade (blade turns to dust, leaving only the hilt. He tosses it aside angrily) This is beyond my skill to heal...She needs Squirrelish medicine.

(We see Raine carrying Mena over his shoulder as the party quickly makes their way through a darkened forest.)

Raine: C'mon now, hurry!

Aus: But we're six days from Mossflower-She'll never make it!

Raine: Hang on Menatus...

Mena: (delerious moan) Bloodrath...

(Switch to Salamandastron. We see it now looks more like a militry fortress than the peaceful haven earlier in the film. Sweep camera along in an overview of the pit before spiraling upward to the top of the tower. We see a little bat-moth fluttering delicately towards Bloodrath who gently catches it in midair. He whispers a message in another language before letting it fly off. Camera dives down into the pit where we see rats manufacturing weapons and armor in the typical assembly line fashion as Stormclaw walks around inspecting the progress. We see other rats tending to eggs of slime and filth where more rats are being born. Stormy pauses at the scene of one being hatched while his rat companions eye the sac containing the beast nervously. We see the face of this new rat press against the membrane of the filth sac before ripping through it with his hands. Stormy looks on in fascination as Master In Training Will rips out of the sac and strangles the rat who was tending to him. Stormy smiles evilly before this scene fades out.)

 *loves the word squirrelish*

 

Quote from: TR ShadowAragorn: Bloodwake
Bilbo: Ad
Boromir: Kilk
Frodo: Menatus
Gandalf: Bloodrath
Gimli: Wickedclaw
Gollum: Wolf Bite
Isildur: Beatles
Legolas: Shael
Merry: Calria
Pippin: Bluemoon
Sam: Aust
Saruman: Fenix
Sauron: Stormclaw
Strider: Raine
Theoden: John

I SEIOUSLY hope this is not dead.... Above is the casting as it now stands.

 *reading post before mine*


I don't see my name in there ;)  

 There goes the topic....

 Well, TR hasn't written anything in quite some time...

 I kinda thought I made it clear that I quit...

 Well, there was the big thing about your friend, but you made yourself sound caught up in the moment, like you were saying it out of depression. Darkness (if he's still here, he's a psychologist) will back me up on this. I hope. :unsure:  ^ I'm With Stupid  

 Ooh. ^_^ Why did no-one tell me that this existed? It's just as well I've started trolling the boards in order to discover what went on in my extensive absence.  

 Poor Raine. *pats*

 Ah, don't worry about it. I'm flattered to have been given such a major part in spite of not actually being here.

I claim Agent Smith if we do a Matrix version.

 You have no idea how suprised I was to find a topic I did about 4 months ago on page one...

*Thinks about contenueing it*

Hmm, I might do one more scene later.

 You should, Julie! It was one of my favorite topics of all time!

 Heh, yeah. It certainly looks real cool.

 Yeah, this is cool. I hope in the next scene (if there is one) that I can be a main person or something. I love LOTR there great novels. And amzing movies.

 Yeah, maybe I'll get a decent part later on......  :D  

 Could I be..someone else? Not a Black Rider this time?

 *pokes Ju* Continue! I'm not even in here yet!  

Quote from: Ashyra NightwingCould I be..someone else? Not a Black Rider this time?

You just didn't like getting hit in the face with the torch ^_^  .  

 ACK!  I got 90 percent done with scene five, then my computer crashed.  Does anyone know what that weird looking button that says "save" does?

 Umm... Does it save?

 Maybe it "Saves", but doesn't "save", save, "save" or "save".
We should look into that...

 0.o Nooo! The save button actually sucks you through the computer screen, and forces you to save the earth from the evil minions of Planet Bob!
*falls over*

  :mellow:  

 Act 3: Scene 2

Aus: (looks over Mena anxiously in the dark. Mena looks really worse for wear at the moment. She looks a lot paler and her skin has a slight jaundice tone. She is crying out in pain every so often, adding to Aus's anxiety.) Mrs. Menatus? (Touches Mena's face) She's growing cold!

(Raine says nothing and looks off into the distance.)

Bluemoon: (nervously) Is she going to die?

Raine: (turning back to the voles)(quietly) She's passing over into the Shadow. Soon, she'll be vermin like them...

(Viscous howls and screams are heard in the distance)

Calria: (whispers) They're close...

Raine:(urgently) Aus, do you know of the flowers of Icetor?

Aus: Flowers of WHAT?

Raine: (slightly annoyed) Icetor.

Aus: Icetor?! But that's a weed!

Raine: It just may help her. Come on, we must hurry. (Aus and Raine split off in different directions of the forest. We see Aus's face reflected in the torchlight looking very anxious as he searches for the plant that may help save his friend. Raine in the meantime scrapes some white flowers off a rock and places them into a bag. Suddenly, he feels a blade pressed to his throat.)

Ilse: (amused) What's this? A Ranger caught off his guard?

(Mena groans again and rolls over. Suddenly, her face is illuminated in a brilliant white light. She gasps in wonder as Ilse appears in a white robe.)

Ilse: Menatus... (** means Elvish/squirrelish ((whichever you prefer =P))) *I am Ilse, I've come to help you... Hear my voice, return to the Light...*

Calria: (Whispers) Who is she?

Ilse: (Looking over Menatus who's still crying out) She's not going to last...

Aus: (Awed) She's an elf...

Ilse: She's fading quickly. We must get her to Coolclaw at once. (Helps Raine lift Mena onto her badger) I've been looking for you for two days. (Glances over shoulder somewhat nervously) There are four ferrets behind you.  Where the other ones are, I do not know...

Raine: *Stay with the voles. I'll send badgers for you all as soon as I can*

Ilse: (grabs the badgers reins) *I'm the faster rider*

Raine: *The Road is too dangerous--I don't want to get you involved.*

Ilse: (smiles sadly) *But I am involved--The fate of RWL is at stake and I intend to do my part to save it. Besides, if I can get across the river, the power of the squirrels will protect us.* I am not afraid of them.

(Raine nods slowly as Ilse mounts the badger)

Raine: Ride hard and don't look back.

(Ilse nods and urges her badger forward with a squirrelish phrase.)

Aus: (shouts) What're you doing?!! Those ferrets are still out there!!

(We hear the dramatic Lord of the Rings theme as Ilse rides urgently across a field, Mena looking horribly sick. The field gradually shifts to a forest scene, and we catch glimpses of the ferrets right on Ilse's tail.  Ilse rides madly between the trees in an attempt to cut the ferrets off but Ashyra manages to reach out to grab Mena who looks at her outstretched hand wearily. Ilse glances at Ashyra, ordering her badger to go faster tersely. Eventually the forest melts into a flat plane and all nine wraiths form a sort of V formation directly behind Ilse's horse.  Ilse grits her teeth in determination as she races towards a river, stopping on the opposite shore. The ferrets stop themselves in the shallows of the river and Ashyra's horse rears slightly. She whispers something in the language of Salamandastron and again, signals for Ilse to surrender Mena.  Ilse smiles and draws her sword, rearing her own badger a bit.)

Ilse: If you want her, come and claim her!

(The ferrets hiss and rush forward.  Ilse smiles grimly and begins chanting in Squirrelish. Unbeknownst to the ferrets, the water is raising at their horses ankles. Suddenly, a title wave ((with random shiny objects mixed in with the water because Ilse likes shiny objects)) whose crest is made up of prancing badgers plows into the ferrets, sending them cart wheeling down the river. Mena lets out a feeble groan before slumping over.  Ilse's eyes widen and she starts shaking Mena a bit)

Ilse: No! No! Menatus, no! Don't give in! Not now! (a tear goes down her face)(whispers) What Grace has given me...let it pass to her....Let her be spared... (There is a white light as the image of Ilse fades away and a Wizened Coolclaw appears suddenly, saying Squirrelish spells.  We are left with a feeling of peace as the scene fades to white.)

(End scene)

I used a few extra people for this scene.  I had Ilse be that one lady that picks up Frodo/Menatus and I needed a squirrel to heal Menatus so I just gave it to Coolclaw.  I may actually do a few more scenes before I quit again ^_^.  I'm thinking about replacing Bluemoon for the later scenes because he's no longer here and he never was a big RWLer, so if you want toe part of Pippen, and you do not already have a part, drop me a PM.

~Julie~

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I just realized that I have a punctuation mistake in the title of this topic (And how old is this?).  It's RWL, The Battle for Emperor, when it should have been RWL: The Battle for Emperor XD.

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Sorry for double posting.  It won't happen again XD.

 I've changed the title for you, it now RWL: The Battle for Emperor and not RWL, The Battle for Emperor.

How's that?

 Yay! Add on more, Ju! I've been wondering when you were going to continue this, you haven't even reached my parts yet, it's so close...

 were never going to make it to my part, u aren't going to make it king John....

 Hey Ju, think you could add me in there somewhere?

 ~Prods Ju~ Write more please! They've been great so far, dont stop now!  Oh, and can I be Haldir?

 She didn't write more yet...