The vermin charged.
The defenders came.
Blood spattered,
Like the rain.
A haze of blood,
Fogging the sky red.
Many would eternally go to bed.
Spears glinted,
Swords clashed.
The weather battered,
Limbs lashed.
The cries rang out,
The seas flowed red.
When it was all over,
Evil still wasn't dead.
It never would be,
It would rise once more.
Fighting it would be,
Losing once more.
That's creepy. But it's good.
I think it's pretty witty! I like it...I think you've got a talent for that kinda thing
not bad, I agree that it's kinda creepy though...
meh. still, nice job with it
Good job.
i lick it. u shold post more peotry on here. everybody shold.
*thwacks rat man* It should be like this:
I (remember capitalization) like it. You (NOT "u") should post more poetry on here. Everybody should.
PLEASE try to write better, as it makes this whole forum easier to read.
*hopes he did it as well as Calria would have*
u're stupid. nobpody carez how i type. u cn undrestand meh, kant u?
Yes, of course I can! :snicker:
Your sentence SHOULD be like this:
You're nice. Nobody cares how I type. You can understand me, can't you?
then shut upp! u ned 2 git a life.,;
YOU SHUSH UP!! *kicks newbie out of forum*
"Then Shu- up! You need to get a life."
One IMPORTANT rule of newbness. Never, I repeat NEVER insult an oldbie.
And we can hardly understand you. If someone corrects you, they are doing it to help you.
HEY!1! dont inslt my bruthr! u r soooo stoopid, my brother ROKS at tis game!1!!11! he'l kill yu ALL :angry: :angry:
wel he inslutted meh so i cn say watevr i wnat 2 him ok?
an i m not a 'newb' or watevr u ppl cal that i am gud at rwl. rel gud.
big bad rat man and joe34, ye both are big annoying newbies and should be thrown as soon as possible into a fresh pile of rat dung
Quoteu're stupid. nobpody carez how i type. u cn undrestand meh, kant u?
wazzat? I'm all confuzzled... who/what is nobpody? no potty? meh.
*raises eyebrow*
You're good at RWL? What number are you?
i m numr 91 on trubo. im rel gud i hav lotz uv stuf
HEY!! u stopd persun. i shud kil U an mik U go n a pil of rat dung watevr taht is.....
You newbs are soooo dumb. You don't know what rat dung is? *shakes head* Does any one of you have an account on regular?
yah u only hva 40-sumpin poostz so u r knew 2 so u r bnieg stoopd!!!1!1111!!!!!!!@
Erm, I had an account with 530 posts before a hacker deleted it, you know. Anyone else on the forum could tell you that.
LIER :angry:
yup. Ashyra Nightwing tis an old bie, or atleast a middle bie, so messing with her will get you no where fast...
Windhound, I see you watching, tell him it's true. I coudn't have been a Cafi member if I was a newb, because Cafi membership was only available on the old forums.
oh yeh im numbr 976 in reglr so dunt ms wit ME :angry: :angry:
yah mah bruthr is gud 2 so dun mes wit us cuz we is da bom.
i bin playion 4 3 daze i ent no newbie whatevr. meby mah bruthr iz sinse he just got her butt im not!!!!!!!!1!!1!!!
3 days? I've been playing since December.
asyre wut # r u so i cn beet u up
:P I'm Windhounds 480, and I could crush you without any effort. stop with the threats, they are sooo annoying.
oh... and I've been playing since... um... old old server, first version... when was that? I got in DI... hehe
You're not even out of protection. You haven't even done anything yet. I'm number 29. BRING IT ON.
And my name's ASHYRA.
i aksd asyra yo dumy <_< iv playd THRE HUNDRD tims mor then u hav, so b QUIT!1!!
yah if u pik on mah bruthr u pick on meh n i hav mor than u cn deel wit so git on trubo n i wil mak u wish u wuld shutttt up know!
haha i r ASO gud at tis gam i alreddy hav 1 milion DOLRS!!1! im so gud i dun evn ned gards
Quote from: joe34i aksd asyra yo dumy <_< iv playd THRE HUNDRD tims mor then u hav, so b QUIT!1!!
Corrections.
I asked Ashyra, you dummy. I've played three hundred times more than you have, so quit it.
No, I will not quit it... How I wish Cal was here...
1mil? I make 3mil a turn!
I'm vientoperros in turbo, look in my sig, you cant touch me.
I lose 14 mil per turn, so beat that! yes, lose 14 mil per turn, quite sad, but... yup...
man i red wat she postd lick n im soooooo gladd she letf b4 i got on her bcuz i rely thnik she wuz men u no i tink seh wuz rel men evn menr thun u ppl
n u mustt b liein abut makin 3 mlil a turn cuz i olny mak abut 400 thuzand n i hav sooo muhc land n stuf!
haha i GEIN 2k a TERN!! haha yo guyz you shod aly wit me cuz im gudd/
Quote from: big bad rat manman i red wat she postd lick n im soooooo gladd she letf b4 i got on her bcuz i rely thnik she wuz men u no i tink seh wuz rel men evn menr thun u ppl
n u mustt b liein abut makin 3 mlil a turn cuz i olny mak abut 400 thuzand n i hav sooo muhc land n stuf!
I didn't understand a word of that, you know. Please post it again, and this time make put some effort into your typing.
btw, I'm rank 20.
man u r soooo shoopid u cant evn spel rite wut dos btw MEEN aneway?
By The Way. Newbs like you need to get a life.
And some extra spelling lessons.
wut???!?!?!??????!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!???????1?!?!??11???? :blink: :angry:
oh i get it u dont went i to bet u up i se wel u r gona get bet up noiw
You spell worse than a person in kindergarten.The only thing you can beat up is dead dog.My account got deleted like Ashyra's but I joined in April.
By the way if you keep doing what you're doing you're going to get banned from the forums.
p.s. How many time did you flunk english. *stupid newbie*
im gud at skool i am in da 4 grad i rok
Oh wow I'm impressed.I'm in the seventh grade.Newbies like you give the rest of us newbies a bad name.
haha u dunt evn no wut a noob is :lol:
A newbie is a person that just got on and started.
I'd advise you to shut up soon. You'll get gagged, mark my words.
wuts ur # ill kil u an stik u in rat dung lol :angry:
Yep and gagged longer than I got gagged.
al rite u aksd fr it i kil u naow alaong wit al ur uder shupid friends
You calling me stupid? As soon as you get out of protection I will mash you. 2000 rats? I'll show you what proper attacking looks like.
I don't know I don't play to much I just read the forums.
It's." All right you asked for it I'm going to kill you now along with all your other stupid friends." Well I think a certain person who likes proper grammer and spelling will kill you first.He's in the top ten.
haha ges wut i don car LOL :angry:
nethe do i. were not newbs were bin playn rwl sins last wek lol
hey if u watn to takl im : killemshootem in AIM lol
I think you do care if you get killed.
wut?
Quote from: birtanny67nethe do i. were not newbs were bin playn rwl sins last wek lol
It should be:
Neither do I. We are not newbies, we've been playing redwall since last week.
your shupid :angry:
Quote from: joe34your shupid :angry:
It should be, once again:
Your stupid!
(I'm truely tired of correcting these worthless posts! Someone get Calria)
if crilia wus her i stil dun car lol an stpoo corctig my spelnig
Quote from: joe34if crilia wus her i stil dun car lol an stpoo corctig my spelnig
*Yawn*:
If Calria was here, I still don't care lol! And stop correcting my spelling!
(Please get her!)
shesh jst becus i spel wurs den carilai,,..k...i cant beleve yo idjuts
Quote from: joe34shesh jst becus i spel wurs den carilai,,..k...i cant beleve yo idjuts
Again:
Shesh! Just because I spell worst than Calria, Fine! I can't believe you idiots!
Quoteif crilia wus her i stil dun car lol an stpoo corctig my spelnig
Whoa do you go to school, man? Or do you just forgot to listen because you are insulting people?
AgH2!1111! y cant i spel ir own wey???`???
stp insting joe34. i kill u on rwl. wats ur nnumber
How incredibly SAD. Newbs who probably don't even go to school should be banned...
ja u wim[s i kil u wit my stotes tel i ur numbr and i fite u
I ain't afraid of you n00bs! My number is 622. I will destroy you. I am sick of you guys!
LOL!!1! i cant belev u i kil TUNES mor pepl tahn u i bet u up as sun as i get ot of portetcion!!11! :angry:
Er... If you're still in protection, how can you kill people? You're a liar and a newb.
Quote from: Bran StoneshieldQuote from: joe34your shupid :angry:
It should be, once again:
Your stupid!
(I'm truely tired of correcting these worthless posts! Someone get Calria)
You're stupid. That's the correct grammar. And really, joe34, this is a gesture of idiocy that is giving people who try to be middlebies a bad name. You are either and imbecile (though I doubt you know what that means) and an idiot, which are synonyms, not that you'd know that, and you need to crawl back to the pile of vermin dung that you were born in! Here are the appropriate symbolics for someone who is as stupid as you:
:angry: :wacko: ::help!:: :sick: :zzz: :shrugs:
~ A message from RazorClaw the Cunning
The jig is up. Ad figured it out Aus and Ashyra!
We all know that, Cat-Food Boy. :snicker: :snicker: :snicker: