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Discussion => General Discussion => Topic started by: Trident on February 09, 2003, 07:41:28 PM

Title: ~*~ Poem ~*~
Post by: Trident on February 09, 2003, 07:41:28 PM
 I made this up two years ago, and thought it was redwallish enough to be posted.

"The morning dawn soon turns to night,

As the moon casts rays of bright.

All those who've died in the wars,

Have gone behind dark forest doors.

And those alive are yet still weeping,

For their friends eternally sleeping."



I was sad when I was that age, many deaths fell then.  Not a good time at all, I'm surprised I survived.
Title: ~*~ Poem ~*~
Post by: Shytalon on February 09, 2003, 07:46:08 PM
 Ooo... Haiku mode!

Dusky red building
Setting sun, and orange sky
All must end some time

~Shy, Myuh!
Title: ~*~ Poem ~*~
Post by: Trident on February 09, 2003, 07:47:26 PM
 Haiku's are ok, I go for rhythm and rhymes usually.
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Post by: Aqualis on February 09, 2003, 07:49:17 PM
 Nice. Hmmm, I never really tried to write a haiku, but I have written a few poems. Here's my favorite:

The flower stands
as the city falls
Those who hold the flower stand
those who guard the city fall

[Edit: I can't ryhme either.]
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Post by: Shytalon on February 09, 2003, 07:59:04 PM
 I really love hiaku, because there is so much symbolism involved. And I just have a knack for it, but since you insist on verse...

The sun rises on each empire
Giving birth to new ages
Akin to the logs in a fire
Known to few sages
The sun sets on each, too
As their fall brings strife
The land must always renew
As all things are given new life.

Thought it was fitting.

~Shy, Myuh!
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Post by: Beem on February 09, 2003, 09:30:17 PM
 ooooo poetry is good.  I have bunches of it  here
Boredoms inspiration
or if that doesn't work go here
http://www.geocities.com/de_dude7/writinga...oetrypage5.html  there is also more on the next page.  BTW most of those were written during some tiem of turmoil or another ^_^.  have fun.
-winters minion, the post ninja  :ph34r:  
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Post by: on February 09, 2003, 09:45:50 PM
 I can write poems, but now its 11 and i'm too lazy to think something up. Go to rhymezone.com and do it yourself!
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Post by: Menatus on February 10, 2003, 05:55:25 PM
 We set off for
we arrived.
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Post by: on February 10, 2003, 06:04:59 PM
 LOL. Here is a remake of menatus' poem!

We went,
We came.
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Post by: Menatus on February 10, 2003, 09:23:21 PM
 NO!! You must not alter the poem in anyway or else I'll sue you for copywrite infringement!!!

I love that story *sniff*
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Post by: Wickedclaw on February 10, 2003, 09:27:49 PM
 Confucious say: He who stands on toilet, is high on pot.

~Wickedclaw
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Post by: Abby The Rat on February 11, 2003, 07:02:36 AM
 Night has fallen
Snow is falling
And there stands
One Wildcat, true

To all evil
His Name is
Known to all
As Black Plague
Leader of The
Clan Of Winter

Powerful that is
Peaceful that is
White as the
Clear clean snow

Along him there
Stand his friends
Loyalt and true
Watching the Weak
In all Weather
At all Times

But Winter Will Always Protects Them
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Post by: on February 11, 2003, 07:14:10 AM
Quote from: MenatusNO!! You must not alter the poem in anyway or else I'll sue you for copywrite infringement!!!

I love that story *sniff*
OK then menatus, how about this?

We went,
We came.?

?Cheesey Feb 2003
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Post by: on February 11, 2003, 07:15:29 AM
 Nice Ad *claps* I didnt think anybody in our clan could write a poem. Wut a way to show them! YAY!
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Post by: Abby The Rat on February 11, 2003, 07:17:36 AM
 Hey, if you look in the clan crier for Winter, then you see a poem that one of my captain have done. It is going to be our long motto

And I'm the leader so I had to write something.
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Post by: General Austin on February 11, 2003, 07:56:14 AM
 This one is for cat lovers!

"How much cuter could a cute cat get if a cute cat could get cute?"

A copyI know, but I am not good at all in writing, so I'm pretty happy that I could think something up!
Title: ~*~ Poem ~*~
Post by: Trident on February 11, 2003, 07:08:42 PM
 I've made up several more poems, most of them I forgot.  For now, I'll start off with a song by Stevie Wonder.

See, apon the moment long ago,
One step away and there you will be,
So young and carefree,
Again you will see,
That place in time,
So gold.

Still, into that way back when,
You thought that all would last forever,
But like the weather,
Nothing can ever,
And be in time,
Stay gold.

But can it be,
When we can see,
So vivedly,
A memory.
And yes you say,
So much the day,
To fade away,
And leave a ray of sun,
So gold.

Like, it's but a twinkling of an eye,
Though filled with sorrow and compassion,
Though not imagin,
All things that happen,
Will age too old,
Though gold.



~Trident's favorite song ((very nice to sing, you should rent the outsiders and listen to it  :P )